Jimtopia's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Duders: Huntin' Time!]

I'll be the first to review it.

Despite your nasty comment on my latest news post, I still decided to review this. I know you were just trying to help, but you came across as mean when you said it. I figured this was the best way to get your attention.

Annnnyway! Onto the review.

Good Lip-syncing in this one, even though the guy on the right (not sure what his name is) didn't need a mouth, the guy on the left's mouth was timed fairly well. The graphics in this were okay, but a little awkward looking at points; some of the lines on people were thicker than others, and it looked kind of weird. I did love the Fire and the Sky though, awesome work on those.

The humor in this was pretty good, kind of gross at one point, but that was intentional, so it's cool. I liked the joke at the end, "Okay that's enough of that." *gunshots*. Nice.

Other than the slightly awkward graphics, this was a pretty good flash.

8/10
4/5
~Jimtopia

TheCriminalDuder responds:

Sorry if I sounded mean. I just tend to be very striaght forward sometimes.

Thanks for the review. I notice the awkwardness of it all too. The shading and even more FBF helped a lot. I'm practicing with the wacom everyday now. The new shorts/toons should be even better.

Also, the one without a mouth is MTC aka MTCaptain. :3

[Hydroelectric Documentary]

Awesome work!

I learned so much about hydroelectricity I almost died! Lol, anyway, nice work on this, it was very informative. Congrats on Daily First as well!

PostTimeskipSam responds:

Learning can kill! Thanks, for the review!

[GunChest Episode 01_01]

Due to the graphics, I couldn't vote lower than 4.

Okay so, let me just get this out of the way, the graphics. AMAZING. Awesome 3D work.

Okay, so now then, the story is in need of some serious improvement. The humor (what little there was) never really struck a cord with me. Just... everything about the writing is bad. I hate to say that, because I hate reviewers who just say things are bad, but man... you really need to work on the story.

I know it's the first episode, but I almost couldn't watch all the way through due to the cheesiness and genericness of the storyline. The newscaster (who I assume was supposed to be silly) just looked awkward, and made no sense. I'm fine with him being a robot or something, but he was like... a jack-in-the-box thing... yeah, that's just weird. I hope that in the future you make the newscaster not a weird yellow jack-in-the-box man. It's not funny, just dumb.

Now, I'm not docking this thing due to the voice acting quality at all. That part wasn't bad. I can't understand Japanese, so I appreciated the subtitles, but from what I heard. It was good.

I'm sure that with these you are going to get a huge fan-following, but I just can't really follow this.

Good luck in your future en devours.
-Jimtopia

[NiGHTS journey to Dumbnes]

'twas okay.

For some reason the humor just didn't click with me in this movie. I liked the concept, because Sega is insanely bad at telling stories, but there just wasn't enough jokes. There are so many things that you could have made fun of, but didn't. It's almost like you were attempting to make sure people wouldn't get lost in the story, and I don't think that's necessary. Otherwise it was good, I got a chuckle out of it.

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RogerregoRRoger responds:

True, part 1's crippled since it needs to build up before the real fun starts.
Shame my pc can't handle a longer movie , if part 2 was attached it would have been better.
Ah well, next time wil lbe better.

[Walk in the Woods]

That was funny.

Usually I'm not into "that kind" of Humor, but man that was hilarious.

[ComiX Episode One!]

Interesting.

You had some fairly good animation there, although I did notice a few arms behind where they should be, but nit-picking aside, I really enjoyed it. It's got some good humor I think, and the series as a whole definitely has potential. I'd try to slow down the pace of the cartoon a bit though, it seemed unnecessarily short if ya ask me. Anyway, once again, nice work. I look forward to future installments.

~Jimtopia

DAGamesOfficial responds:

lol glad ya liked it :) Meh, that's just the way I animate, I can't really get may things right in terms of animating. besides that the pase is gonna stay the same, cus like I said it's just my way of animating, also the next episodes gonna be longer than the other :)

ps: Haven't bloody speaken to you in ages

[Black & White Anniversary]

That was awesome.

The music stopped a little early for mine, but otherwise it was absolutely awesome. I loved all the parts. The spinning skull was pretty kick-ass as well. Great work!

fishhook responds:

yeah as always there was audio problems but it works on most pc's

soz for any inconvinenfence?

[The Narrator's Love Story]

XD Awesome!

That was very good, I loved it! Nice work, very funny.

PostTimeskipSam responds:

Thanks, Glad you liked it!

[Time in a Bottle]

You've got some real talent.

I've tried doing what you do, only to fall very short of something this epic. Honestly, this was a great cartoon, you should be proud. I loved the way the characters just faded into a bunch of lines, that was amazing everytime I saw it. Once again, great work; and keep it up!

~Jimtopia

["The Cliff" by axl932]

That was really really good.

Honestly, the message was great, it showed the 2 sides of the story. I loved it. Really, just for this, you're gettin' added to my favorite artists!