Score: 4

"Due to the graphics, I couldn't vote lower than 4."

submission: GunChest Episode 01_01

date: April 18, 2008

Okay so, let me just get this out of the way, the graphics. AMAZING. Awesome 3D work.

Okay, so now then, the story is in need of some serious improvement. The humor (what little there was) never really struck a cord with me. Just... everything about the writing is bad. I hate to say that, because I hate reviewers who just say things are bad, but man... you really need to work on the story.

I know it's the first episode, but I almost couldn't watch all the way through due to the cheesiness and genericness of the storyline. The newscaster (who I assume was supposed to be silly) just looked awkward, and made no sense. I'm fine with him being a robot or something, but he was like... a jack-in-the-box thing... yeah, that's just weird. I hope that in the future you make the newscaster not a weird yellow jack-in-the-box man. It's not funny, just dumb.

Now, I'm not docking this thing due to the voice acting quality at all. That part wasn't bad. I can't understand Japanese, so I appreciated the subtitles, but from what I heard. It was good.

I'm sure that with these you are going to get a huge fan-following, but I just can't really follow this.

Good luck in your future en devours.
-Jimtopia

Score: 7

"'twas okay."

submission: NiGHTS journey to Dumbnes

date: April 18, 2008

For some reason the humor just didn't click with me in this movie. I liked the concept, because Sega is insanely bad at telling stories, but there just wasn't enough jokes. There are so many things that you could have made fun of, but didn't. It's almost like you were attempting to make sure people wouldn't get lost in the story, and I don't think that's necessary. Otherwise it was good, I got a chuckle out of it.

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Jimtopia

Score: 8

"Nice game."

submission: The World's Hardest Game

date: April 9, 2008

The graphics weren't much to look at, but the gameplay was fun, nice work.

Score: 9

"That was funny."

submission: Walk in the Woods

date: March 26, 2008

Usually I'm not into "that kind" of Humor, but man that was hilarious.

Score: 8

"Interesting."

submission: ComiX Episode One!

date: March 17, 2008

You had some fairly good animation there, although I did notice a few arms behind where they should be, but nit-picking aside, I really enjoyed it. It's got some good humor I think, and the series as a whole definitely has potential. I'd try to slow down the pace of the cartoon a bit though, it seemed unnecessarily short if ya ask me. Anyway, once again, nice work. I look forward to future installments.

~Jimtopia

Score: 9

"That was awesome."

submission: Black & White Anniversary

date: March 12, 2008

The music stopped a little early for mine, but otherwise it was absolutely awesome. I loved all the parts. The spinning skull was pretty kick-ass as well. Great work!

Score: 8

"XD Awesome!"

submission: The Narrator's Love Story

date: February 12, 2008

That was very good, I loved it! Nice work, very funny.

Score: 9

"You've got some real talent."

submission: Time in a Bottle

date: January 8, 2008

I've tried doing what you do, only to fall very short of something this epic. Honestly, this was a great cartoon, you should be proud. I loved the way the characters just faded into a bunch of lines, that was amazing everytime I saw it. Once again, great work; and keep it up!

~Jimtopia

Score: 7

"That's hilarious!"

submission: South Park's Heroin Hero

date: December 24, 2007

I almost had him too!

Score: 6

"Interesting..."

submission: AIR Pong

date: December 13, 2007

It certainly had a pong feel to it. I would have enjoyed the background more if the clouds were made by you, and were animated. It just felt to static to be "AIR pong." It was enjoyable though, and hard did present a bit of a challenge, so good work on that. All in all, 6/10 not great, but it's fun.